cleanup

I completed round 1 of my rewrite process.  I cleaned up grammar, typos, and reworded some things.  Also changed a bunch of parentheticals to action, or just removed them and let the dialogue speak for itself.

Next step is reading more of this book on re-writing and making sure story structure is good.  Starting that tomorrow.

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